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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Jan 25, 2012.
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(Randomness)
"..." I pull Riku out of the water, back to normal, and frantically check for his pulse
(Derp :3)
"Y-yeah, I'm good" -Looks ghostly pale-
Shakes head "Stop lying..."
"I-I'm fine"
(He died!)
"Your not fine!"
"Yeah I am"
Riku: *Is unconcious and barely breathing*
(I'm dead)
(WHAT?!)
(NUUUU! Ari! :lol: ) "R-Riku..." I say worriedly, beginning mouth to mouth.
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Riku: *Water splashes out of his mouth*
(Goodbye.)
"...please... say something..." I plead, hugging him to me. "Don't die..."
Stands up and tries not to put any weight on broken foot
"Ouch!"