The Nightmare Man

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -SE_Millielicious, Jan 20, 2012.

  1. Bump bumpy^^ moar
     
  2. You have more than five jerki know some peoples are are just reading and not commentingmaybe if you sell your turquoise bra to me...Awesome idea!! I know!
     
  3. I'm not a jerk  and if they don't comment, I won't know to tell them when I update, so that's just silly
     
  4. Continue!
    Bump bumpbump
    Bummmmp!!!
     
  5. THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGG! I'm addicted
     
  6. I have no idea what to do next people pm me ideas?:\
     
  7. Bumpppp!!!! 
     
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    Luke walked me to his car and we set off on our way home, not caring about the consequences of ditching school.

    'You didn't have to do that you know.' I frowned, he was still shaking in anger. He tightened his grip on the steering wheel and clenched his teeth together, 'Yes I did. He deserved a lot more than that.'

    'You don't mean it, you're just angry.' I had never seen Luke like this, it was kind of scary.
    'And why aren't you? Why are you sticking up for him? After all that he's done to you you still sit here and tell me that he doesnt deserve to feel some pain?!' He was looking at me now, he was furious. 'Im not, now shut up and keep your eyes on the roa-'

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    We were spinning. Round and round, over and over, I didn't know how long for, or how fast it was. It all felt like slow motion to me.

    One minute we were driving along safely, but now this. Luke took his eyes off the road, he didn't see the truck coming the other way. There was a smash, and it felt like the walls of the car were getting closer and closer in, the exterior metal crushing my legs where the were.

    I screamed out in pain as I felt my bones fracture and splinter slowly. Then shards of glass and mirror flew at me from outside and I shielded my face with my hands, causing my arms to produce small streams of dark metallic blood.

    Then I remembered, Luke was shouting because of me. It was my fault we had crashed. I cryed out in pain as my legs snapped excruiciatingly. We had stopped spinning and there was a figure slumped across the dashboard, glass protruding from their chest.

    Oh My God.




    Luke.

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    Had no idea what to do there, sorry
     
  9. Copied the wrong damn thing onto people's Walls, sorry about that=.= anyone got a different idea? Can't use that now.
     
  10. OMFG BUMP! I'm seriously gonna steal your turquoise something (again) if you don't update asap!
    Sexy update btw
     
  11. Bump!!! *steals her sexy turquoise br- I mean something*
     
  12. NOOO GIVE IT BACK! Its special...
     
  13. Bumpy bumpity..continue
     
  14. ᏰᏌᎷᎵ!! 
     
  15. *gives it back* why's it so special?
     
  16. Erm...because it is!