A Love story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), Feb 3, 2012.

  1.  Congrats this story has been titled my favorite story of the day and is mentioned in "Readers Paradise"
     
  2. Gack! Thank you Alida bunny! 
     
  3. "Cruz...Suffocating!"
    She pushed him by his shoulders, he stood tall.
    "Sorry...I'm just really stupid..."
    "Cruz, your the only one that did this to yourself." said Yaneth, grabbing her black notebook by the gate.
    "I know, I just want—"
    "Want what? To break my heart for the billionth time?" she asked coldly, despite the colors on the leaves outside.

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    ;u; little updates. ^_^ Step-mums birthday tommorow.
     
  4. "Look, Yaneth, I know I have one last chance to keep you, and I-"
    "Since when do you have one chance? One LAST chance? Do you know how many times you've already done this to me Cruz Fioré?!"
    "Yaneth, PLEASE!" said Cruz, grabbing her by her shoulders, yelling and in tears.
    "I never have loved someone as much as you, and I can't let you go...."
    "You seem to lie, because if you can leave me for some slut, I'm pretty sure you don't love me."
    The wind seemed to blow at the same temperature as Yaneth's voice. Cruz stood, as in cement feet and made of stone.
    Is that what she really thought? This is the pain I caused for someone I loved?...
     
  5. She took his hands off her shoulders and growled and walked away.
    She flipped him off while walking, and he jumped in surprise.
    "Damnit...."
     
  6. Cyber rubbed his eyes as he stared at the ceiling, thinking.
    Yaneth and Cyber had been going out for about three weeks, a week after the Break up with her and Cruz.
    Cyber texted Yaneth.
    C: Yaneth, where are you?
    Y: I'm walking away from that bastard Cruz. Nothing much. You?
    C: Just thinking, and waiting to see you. What did he want?
    Y: Another stupid chance for him to waste...
     
  7. Hehe.


    Shall I snap his neck.
     
  8. Cyber snapped his phone shut and put it down.
    "That idiot...."
    Yaneth put her phone away and kept walking, leaving that scumbag Cruz behind in the dust.
    "Yaneth! Wait!" he hollered, running after her.
    She rolled her eyes and kept walking.
    "Yaneth!"
    She ignored him, and started running.
    "Fuck!"
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    Cyber's POV


    Cyber started walking in the fall air, looking at all the trees and their warm colors.
    "So nice, the colors and all..."
    A flash of grey ran past him, and he turned around.
    "Who is that?..."
    She yelled,"NO!"
    oh god.
    Cruz fell, scraping his arm against the metal gate.
    "You son of a bitch!" yelled Cyber, punching Cruz on the back, while he was on the ground.
    "Shit! Cyber?!"
    "Yeah, it's me. What the hell do you want from Yaneth?!"
    "Nothing! Jesus Bro, what is your problem?!"
    "Youre not getting another chance from her! You used her!" barked Cyber, hitting Cruz in face, causing him to bleed.
     
  9. Shit. I ain't that violent.