UNAVOIDABLE FEELINGS

My first story i'm going to write ^_^ give me your opinion, guys!

She stared at the door longingly, waiting for the familiar sound of heavy pants shuffling together, and the light pitter - patter of his footsteps. Class had already started and he was late, as usual. The door knob turned slowly and her heart skipped a beat, waiting to see his face. Instead, another student walked in. Disappointed, she slapped her pen down angrily.

They've known each other for a year now, but it felt as if they've been friends since they were kids. Being blunt towards one another, having each other's back, sharing everything that's happening to them as if each day was their last together, she thought of them as a dynamic duo.

She needed him, she couldn't imagine life without him. That's silly though because she obviously just met him a year ago. It was amazing, the feeling she received whenever he smiled, and his touch when he glided his hand across her cheek when she cried. Everything about him made her body overfill with joy.

Lost in her own thoughts, she didn't realize he already walked in and had taken his seat.
"Good morning, Matthew," the teacher said.
"Morning," he replied in his deep voice.

A bubbling feeling rose inside of her. Her head was down, making it seem like she was working, but her eyes averted in his direction. His soft, dark hair was neat as always. His honey colored brown skin glowed underneath the glaring lights. She wanted him to look at her, she wanted him to smile. The feeling was so strong that it ached.

Finally, he looked up and tilted his head in her direction. But the look, the look in his eyes weren't warm and welcoming as they always were. Instead, they were filled with sadness, hatred, and disgust.

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What do you guys think? it's based off of a true story 

 

As he turned away, her heart sank. Something was terribly wrong. Sure, he's given her multiple sad looks before. But, this one... This one was different. There were so many emotions in it that it was hard to decipher.

I have to talk to him , she thought to herself.

For the rest of the period, he didn't look at her, not even a glance. She tuned out the teacher, unable to focus. There was only one thing on her mind. Him. She kept glancing at the clock, wanting the period to be over. Each second made her anxious, causing her to fidget in her seat, and tap her pen consistently on her books.

After twisting her rings a billion times, pulling on her dark brown hair in frustration, and adjusting her purple glasses constantly, the bell finally rung.

She hastily stuffed her books into her bag and looked up to see him walk into the other section of the room. With her heart beating wildly fast, she bounded after him and turned the corner to find him standing in front of a brown table.

Nervously, she clenched her fist and walked up to him. As she got closer, his usual vanilla, baby powder smell danced around her nose. She tapped him on the shoulder and he swiftly turned, his dark brown eyes sharp underneath his glasses.

He was tall, she was only up to his neck. Having him looked down at her with cautious eyes made her feel uneasy.

Softly, she greeted, "Hey matt.."
"Hey," he replied bluntly.
"Um...." she trailed off. She couldn't seem to find the right words.
He glanced at her quizzically, "Is there something you want to ask me?"
Yes , she thought. There's a million things I want to ask you.

Catching her staring at him, he avoided making eye contact and picked up his bag.
Looking in the other direction, he said flatly, "I have to go. I'll talk to you later, I guess." His shoulder roughly bumping into hers as he walked by.

Comments? Advice? Much appreciated ^___^ mellie<3

 

Aww, thanks guys !!  the infamous writer, chloe, is reading my story!!!!!  must make it perfecto!! >:3! I love shrimp  but I'm allergic to them  I will update later, guys. Thanks for reading 

 

She stared at the floor in shock.
Did he really just shove me? Biting down on her lip, she struggled to hold back the tears. I've never seen him so cold... As she turned around, two soft pillows smacked her in the face.

"Heeee!" The voice cried out. "Does it feel soft, wifey?"

She brushed her hair aside to get a good look at the girl in front of her. It was Abigail. One of the most energetic, boobalicious, optimistic girl in her class. For her age, she had a bodacious body. Many guys drooled over her. Not only because she had beautiful hazel eyes, rosy cheeks, adorable smile, and curly black hair. But well.. She was boobalicious

"Hey Abi...," she replied dully.
"What's wrong?! Why are you so down, baby? WHO MADE YOU UPSET, THEY'LL REGRET THEY EVER CROSSED YOU. "
She grinned. As much as she wanted to spill out everything to her, she couldn't.
"No worries, I'm fine. I have to go. I'm going to be late."
She didn't buy it. The expression, "I'M GOING TO WORRY." was written all over her face. Instead, she smiled, "Okay, babe. I love you. You're gorgeous, don't ever forget that! WE'RE GETTING MARRIED, OKAY?!"

Smiling, she grabbed her bag and skipped into the other room. Stopping once because one of her pillow smacked her in the face.

"Nancy! You're late to class!" a voice cried out. She turned around to see one of her friends calling to her. As she was walking out, she sneaked a peek into Matthew's classroom. Usually, he would look up, smile, and wave. Instead, he tilted his head slightly up, rolled his eyes, and looked back down. 

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again, comments, feedback, and advice. Thank you! ^__~ Mellie<3

 

Bumpity bump :3

 

Should I not continue this? 