An Old Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *pikachu99 (01), Jan 22, 2012.

  1. Alley=Skinny, pale, reddish-brown hair, sapphire blue eyes.
    Beth-Normal body size, tan, blonde hair, hazel eyes.
    Tatum-Has extra fat, black, brown hair, green eyes.
    Tyreese- Tatum's half brother, muscular, Puertorican, brown hair, green eyes, eight pack.


    Alley walked through the club alone. Though she was only fifteen she looked old enough to be twenty-one. She walked through a crowd tears running down her face. Her boyfriend... Ex boyfriend, just got caught for having marijuana at school. "How could he do this?" she thought. "He told me he stopped.." she had too much time to herself soon her nose was a bright red that matched the part of her eyes that were supposed to be white. She ran to the bathroom. When she got in she fixed her red strapless dress and makeup. Beep beep. Her phone went off she looked at it, hoping it was Tyreese. But she knew he got in trouble and got his electronics taken away. It was Tatum she looked at the message that said "R u ok?" She replied back "Ya, can u meet me at the club?" There was only one club in their small town so everyone knew what "the club" meant. "Sure," Tatum said. After Alex was all fixed up she went out on the dance floor. She was told that she could drop it low like no other person could. She un-clipped her wavy hair and started to dougie. She didn't notice she was dirty dancing with one of her exes until Tatum arrived. "Oh my god I'm so sorry Beth!" She said to her ex lover. "No problem. I always knew there was something I liked about you." Beth said and grabbed Alley by her waist and kissed her with all the passion Beth had in her body. "Wow..." Alley said trying to hide her smile. "Hey, nevermind don't come to the club I'm leaving." Alley told Tatum. "Oh alright.." Tatum said suspecting something.

    Should I keep writing?
     
  2. Bump. 
     
  3. I'm only gunna update if I actually get readers...
     
  4. Oh. Well, um, bump? 
     
  5. Wow nice one ash
     
  6. Haha:) I get bored alright?:)
     
  7. It's a nice story
     
  8. So are you gunna update for me cuz I'm stuck and tired.
     
  9. So you should keep writing at least I'll read it lol
     
  10. What do you mean?
     
  11. Ugh fine
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    Beth took alley back to her place. Alley sighed as they were on the drive to beth's house it brought back so many memories. Beth and Alley dated for two and a half years but Alley threw it all away for Tyreese who became a pothead and left Alley. Tears ran down Alley's cheeks as she turned up the radio. Beth looked over at Alley. "What's wrong babygirl?" She said and put one of her hands on Alleys leg. "Nothing I'm fine. I was just thinking about how my mom died it was a year ago today. Remember?" Alley lied though her mom really did die a year ago she didn't want Beth to know she was thinking of Tyreese. "Of course I remember..." Beth rubbed one of her eyes. She was there when Alley's mom died and hated seeing her in pain. Alley's mom was really sick and couldn't even walk, she had to crawl to get everywhere. She lived At the hospital for three weeks until they took her off of life support with Alley and Beth standing right there watching Alley's mother drift away into the heavens.



    Bump??
     
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  13. Haha lol no i just took ty's name
     
  14. Write more!!!!
     
  15. Bump. 
     
  16. And who do you know like these characters??

    *Ashlii*
     
  17. I'll write more en la mañana:)