Infernal Rømance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *cookiemonsterx3 (01), Jan 22, 2012.

  1. My name is Cora Persephone, daughter of Hell's Ruler. I was engaged to some Underworld prince, but that didn't stop me from falling in love with a mortal and creating chaos. Here's how my story begun......

    Hii my first fanfic here :3 hope you guys (if there are even any readers -_-) will like it. Here goes nothingg :)
     
  2. Bump! Has a good beginning and te title is great!
     
  3. Cora's Pov.

    The flames in Hell were unusually hot today. I could feel the intense heat on my skin as I made my way to the dining chamber. Entering, i was greeted by complete silence and there was not a soul in sight ( well other than the ones flying outside) .

    Weird. My father would normally be working at the dining table, with all his papers sprawled out infront of him. Where was he?

    Overwhelmed by curiousity, I walked down the hallway that lead to my parent's room. Seeing that the door was ajar, I was about to enter when i heard my mother sobbing. I froze.

    "How did this happen??"

    My mother cried out, asking my father's butler.

    "It seems that Master went into the Human world for revenge."

    The butler said sadly.

    "My apologies ma'am, but we do not know what really happened. All we heard was a loud noise, and when we ran to check what it was, we discovered Master's body lying on the floor."

    I knew what that meant. My father was killed by a mortal, and then, his corpse would naturally come back down to Hell to rot. That was how death worked in Hell.

    But my father...he was formidable, tough, stronger and more powerful than anyone here. How could then, a mere mortal subdue him?

    "Make sure that Cora doesn't find out about this. I don't want her going to the Human world for revenge. I don't need to lose my family..."

    I heard my mother wipe her tears as she ordered.

    The butler bowed.

    It was surprising how her mother always knew what she was going to do.
     
  4. I heard the butler's footsteps approaching the door and I ran. I ran to the ladybrinth where my father's secret lab was hidden. Entering the secret doors my father told me about, found myself at a dead end. The guards there greeted me with fear as i walked past each of them.

    "Lab."

    I ordered without asking. A guard fearfully pointed to a wall on my right. I looked at the wall and stood infront of it. I had no idea how to open it. My father never told me. He said it was forbidden.

    But thar didn't matter anymore, he was dead. Gone. And I wasn't going to hide here and do nothing and let that bastard who killed my father get away with it.

    Effortlessly pushing the wall, it fell apart. My eyes widened as i gasped in awe of what lay ahead of me.

    Shelves and shelves of vials, chemicals, potions were surrounding the lab. There were long tables, filled with weird equipment I had never seen before. And there were creatures positioned at their own spots, busy mixing concocrions. They must be the Ev-ils (Eveels).

    They were exactly like how my father described them to be. Black, with horns on their heads, long pointed noses and glowing yellow eyes. No matter how intimidating they appeared to be, I wasn't scared at all.

    "Human world."

    I demanded for the potion that would transport me there.

    "I-I cannot g-give you t-that potion, your Highness..."

    An Ev-il stuttered as he stared into my eyes with fear.

    "I-I-It is f-forbidden to--"

    I threw him aside, and he smashed against a shelf of potions, breaking them and causing them to land on him. Instantly, his skin burned and he cried out in pain. I felt no pity.

    "Human world"

    I demanded again, raising ny voice. The Ev-il slowly pointed to a small blue vial which was in a glass container. I walked up to it and broke the container, grabbing the vial.

    Opening it, i was about to put a drop on my hand when my mother and my father's man burst in.

    "Cora! What do you think you are doing?"

    My mother asked me, with tears in her eyes. I glared at her, and shouted.

    "I'm not like you! I CAN'T sit here and cry when nothing good comes out of it!"

    "Cora...put that the vial down now!"

    My mother begged.

    I didn't. Instead, i tilted the vial slowly and watched as a blue droplet landed on my palm.

    At once, I was lifted up into the air and I felt a strong wind as the things around me begun spinning in circles.

    "Coraaaa!!"

    My mother screamed out to me in the wind.

    I was entering the human world.....

    Before i completely disappeared, i threw the vial to the ground and the potion spilled onto the surface. I knew it would lose its effect and that it was the last potion. My father was the only one who knew how to make it but he was gone. Now nobody would be able to follow me and bring me back.

    The wind stopped turned into gust and there was loud BAM. I closed my eyes and bid farewell to my mother in my mind.

    FLASHH!

    Rinnnnnnnnnng~
    Rinnnnnnnnnng~

    "Holy crap."

    I heard a man'a voice.

    "The bell rang!"

    "Cmon man! I don't wanna be late for class."

    Another voice spoke.

    I heard a flush and the door opening and closing as footsteps died down. I blinked, opening my eyes and I found myself in some unusual cubicle of some sort. I was confused.

    Was I in the human world?
     
  5. Aww can i get a bump?
     
  6. Extraordinarily interesting, I'd like to see how you expand on this... Please continue 
     
  7. In other words: BUMP!!!!!
     
  8. Ty i will not fail u 
     
  9.  I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I AM NOT KIDDING. THIS IS SO AWESOME. BUMP BUMP BUMP!
     
  10. After a few minutes or so, there was that annoying ringing sound again. Did the humans live with this kind of stuff? No wonder they are so weird.

    I stayed there in the cubicle for a while. I was sitting on a toilet, but why was there a toilet in the middle of this weird room? I felt trapped in here. I pulled up my knees up to my chest and sat there, looking through a small, odd gap infront of me. Throughout the whole time I was in there, there were many different males that came in and pulled their pants a little low to do something. What were they doing to those oddly shaped sinks? Hmmm, it smelled horrid after a while too....Eww.

    Although the stench was unbearable, i have to admit, this was a pretty cool place to be sitting in. I wonder where the females are. Are there no females at all in this world? Was I the only one?

    I was starting to doze off when some old bearded guy opened my cubicle and he gasped when he saw me. I gasped too. He was old and ugly with a mop in his hand. I didn't know what to say so I just waved and smiled at him.

    "This is a cool place."

    I said to him, thinking that he'd agree with me. Instead, he dropped the mop and ran out, screaming.

    "Lockdown! Lockdown!"

    I heard him down the hall. I heard that word before. My father once shouted that word when i was small. I remember going into hiding. Lockdown......the humans used that word too?

    Suddenly, the lights went out.

    What in the world?

    Then, a voice suddenly spoke. It sounded kind of feminine.

    "Attention everyone. We are having a real lockdown. This is not a drill."

    I suddenly heard a loud boom. I stepped out of my cubicle to see what it was, and I saw a gun being pointed at me.

    "Freeze!"

    The male holding the gun ordered me. I looked at him in confusion. Weren't we all suppose to be in hiding? Then why was he pointing a gun at me?

    A female walked in and I gasped in surprise when I saw her. Thank goodness! A female at last! But she was old...ew wrinkles?

    "Who are you, young lady?"

    The old female questioned me.

    "I'm new here, old lady."

    I answered. She somehow looked offended when i said that.

    "New, you say?"

    "Yes, I'm new here."

    I answered.

    "Do you, by any chance happen to be that new girl who just got sent here?"

    Wow. She knew about me. Were the humans expecting my arrival?

    "Y-Yes...im the new girl."

    I said, not knowing what I was doing.

    "Hmm..."

    The old lady looked at me.

    "May i ask why you're in the boy's bathroom?"

    "I don't know. I don't even know where i'm at."

    I repiled, sounding as innocent as i can.

    The old lady suddenly came up to me and dragged me by the arm. Eek! A human was touching me.

    We came to halt infront of place called "Gym". I almost fell over when the old lady stopped walking. I looked up and saw a handsome male shooting a basketball into the hoop. Why was he playing alone?

    "Mr Walker."

    The old lady said to him. The male looked at us and walked over.

    He had this pair of dark blue eyes, auburn hair and a somewhat mysterious aura. The old lady pushed me to him. He caught me in his arms and looked at me.

    "Here you go."

    She finished.

    "Now, don't be like him please."

    She turned around and walked away. The male looked at the old lady and let go of me.

    "Who is this?"

    He asked. The old turned around.

    "Who else?"

    She said, turning back around and walking away.

    The male suddenly grabbed me by my hand and pulled me out into the hallway. Pushing me against a wall, he pierced his deep eyes into mine.

    "Who are you?"

    He asked, not sounding happy.

    "Who are you?"

    I retorted.

    "Do you think you're funny?"

    He growled.

    "Do you think you're tough? Treating me like this..."

    I scoffed, getting off the wall, but he pushed me back. I was slammed against the wall and I glared at him. He stared back at me angrily and walked back into the gym.

    What's up with this man? He was so rude! He was lucky he wasn't in hell! I would have burned him alive.
     
  11. Than, the annoying bell rang again. Did humans have a tape recorder to keep playing that noise or what?

    I followed everyone else. I had no idea where I was going. When I walked in through the doors, I saw many rows of tables lined uo. Everyone ran to a corner and formed a line.

    I stood at the entrance of the door. What was this place?

    "Cmon, I'll buy you lunch."

    A guy said to a girl as they walked past me.

    Lunch.

    Wow. Humans ate together like this? Was this a huge family reunion?

    Suddenly, I was swarmed by a group of females. One of them took a deep breath and stuck out her hand to me. In her hand, there was a purple envelope.

    "Please give this to your brother...."

    She pleaded.

    "I really like him..."

    She seemed to flush. I took a step back, and asked insteas of replying.

    "What? Brother?"

    What was this girl saying? I had no siblings! I was an only child.

    "Yes, your brother."

    Another girl said to me.

    "My brother? Where?"

    I asked in confusion.

    She pointed to a male across the humongous room.

    "Right there, your brother Jayden Walker."

    I looked and saw the male. It was the same one that had pushed me against the wall a few minutes ago..

    Sorry if im posting too much just like to write hahah. Keep bumping hehe~
     
  12. You're not posting too much... Bump
     
  13. BUMPPOOOz
     
  14. I ran into the bathroom, hoping to escape from the crazy girls. Before i could even sigh, the door burst open. The girls came running in and they crowded around me.

    Suddenly, they all pulled out colourful envelopes and shoved them in my face, barely giving me air to breathe.

    "Please! Give our letters to your brother!"

    They all shouted at once. Geez. I felt like my eardrums were going to explode.

    "What?" I asked angrily.

    I wasn't his sister!

    "Pleasee! We've been waiting for your arrival so you can give him our letters!"

    "I'm not your messenger!" I shouted back.

    The girls became wild and started tugging on me. "Please!!!" They kept begging.

    "Back off!" I shouted angrily.

    All the girls got scared and backed away from me as i brushed my dress.

    "If you want to give yours letters to that boy, give them to him yourselves!"

    I screamed at them. "Why ask me??"

    "B-But..." A short girl began, "You live with him...So it's easier.."

    "W-What? I don't live with--" I stopped.

    Oh boy...An idea came to me, and it was even crazier than these girls.

    A few minutes later...

    "Please?"

    "No." He answered without a second thought. I stopped trying to be polite and I turned him around angrily.

    "HEY!" I screamed in his face."Have some manners! At least think about it!"

    "Manners?" He stared at me. "You have some manners. I'm not the one asking a stranger if I could stay at their house. And i'm not the one who lied about being someone else's sibling!"

    "That was an accident! An accident!!"

    "Accidents like that don't just happen. It's clearly a plan!"

    "You ignorant rude boy!! How do your parents even deal with you??"

    The boy stopped and looked me in the eyes with a angry glint.

    "Have you been putting your nose in my business?

    He asked me suspiciously.

    What was he talking about?

    "N-No." I answered him. "I don't even know what you're talking about."

    The boy took a step toward me. I backed away. He took another step forward, and I backed away more. He kept staring at me and moving closer to me.

    What was he planning to do?

    "W-What are you doing?"

    I asked him, still backing away. He didn't answer me. Instead, he continued staring and scooting closer to me. I felt the cold, hard wall touch my back.

    "W-What are you doing?" I asked him, still backing away.

    He didn't answer me. He continued staring at me and continued scooting closer to me. I felt the cold, hard wall touch my back. I got up on the wall as far as I can.

    That boy still didn't stop. He continued coming. I wanted to run, but it was already too late..

    We were only a few inches apart now, yet he still wasn't stopping.. I turned my head to the side, not wanting our faces to touch.

    What was this guy thinking? He better not do anything bad to me..!

    He finally stopped. His chest was touching mine, and his face was only a few inches away from the wall.

    He stopped way too close to me! I never let a guy get this close to me before.

    I raised up my arms to push him off, but as soon as my hands touched his shoulders, he wrapped his arms around my body forcefully.

    I gasped for air as he pulled me deeper into him roughly.

    "W-What are you doing??" I asked as I squirmed, scared and angry. "L-Let me go!!"

    The boy buried his face in my hair and smelled it.

    "Mmm..." he moaned, "sexy.."