The Dawns (not for the easily scared)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_Neon-Ninja_ (01), Jan 12, 2012.

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  1. ᏰᏌᎷᎮᎬᎢᎻ
     
    #21 tash777, Jan 14, 2012
  2. Buuuump!!!!!
     
    #22 TheAndi, Jan 14, 2012
  3. Later that day:
    "So tell us ALL about it then!" Said Charlotte
    "Yeah go on!" Said Molly
    "Well it all started when i fell of my bike...."


    THE END! New story coming soon!
     
    #23 *_Neon-Ninja_ (01), Jan 15, 2012
  4. This must be the shortest fan fic EVER.
     
    #24 tash777, Jan 15, 2012
  5. It was only a short story line
     
    #25 *_Neon-Ninja_ (01), Jan 15, 2012
  6. Very short. About this long? ___
     
    #26 tash777, Jan 15, 2012
  7. A story needs to be longer. Instead of using digits when saying the time, use "1:00" or one o'clock. Not just 1.

    As for said, it's dead.

    You don't have to put,

    "-------" said


    You can just write "----------"

    Without the person. D:
     
    #27 Goldialocks, Jan 15, 2012
  8. I only ended it so soon because i didn't want to drag it on and let it get boring and i did put the proper times and i put who said it so it wasn't confusing!
     
    #28 *_Neon-Ninja_ (01), Jan 16, 2012
  9. Give her a break it's just her creativity and she was just using ideas x
     
    #29 *Hannie-May (01), Jan 17, 2012
  10. Yeah, but it wasn't enough to satisfy... I'd very much appreciate it if someone (Preferably the OP) continued in this world...
     
    #30 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 17, 2012
  11. Any volunteers to continue this story?
     
    #31 tash777, Jan 17, 2012
  12. Tash its my story and when i say it ends then IT ENDS!!!!
     
    #32 *_Neon-Ninja_ (01), Jan 20, 2012
  13. True, Tash...
     
    #33 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 20, 2012
  14. Woah calm down Casey 
     
    #34 tash777, Jan 20, 2012
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