Innocence

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Goldialocks, Jan 19, 2012.

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    The sudden break of emotion is too hard to contain. The mixture of feelings that pour out are enough to make you collapse. The sudden loss... Of innocence, it makes you want to kill yourself. Remorse, my dear, is a powerful emotion. It is one you feel... When you've done something that can never be undone.
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    It was an autumn breeze, the cool feel of wind latching onto your skin, giving you goosebumps as you watch from the horizon, your binoculars glued to your eyes as you go cloud watching.

    "Louis! Louis! Look! It's a bird! It's a pretty one too!"

    The girl wearing a pumpkin orange sweater grabbed her friend by the arm, thrusting him to the railing of the balcony where she was once watching clouds. The boy, Louis, was staring at the sky, catching only a glimpse of the bird his friend was ranting on about.

    "I see... A glimpse of black and white feathers."

    "Yes! Yes! Black and white! Isn't it pretty?"

    "Jacque, you need to calm down..."

    "It's Jackie for the last time! Not Jacque!"

    Louis sighed and ruffled his hair, huffing out the air he breathed.

    "Whatever... Look, Jackie, there's a cloud..."

    Both of them swerved to the same direction, Jackie accidentally hitting him on the shoulder. He cussed before looking up, seeing the shape of a heart that formed in the sky.

    "It's so... nice."

    Jackie took off her binoculars, glancing up at the sky before looking down, drumming he fingers on the railing before looking at Louis.

    "Louis..."

    "No. Jacque. Listen. Promise me... That we'll get married when we're older?"

    She looked up, her mouth forming an O as she looked at her bestfriend. Seven years of getting to know him better, seven years of being his friend, seven years of mutual feelings... Have become feelings of affection.

    Specs of tears could be seen in her eyes as she nodded, breathing in and out. She wanted it to be so damn true, but alas. In a few years' time, he would forget about this silly little promise. In a few years' time...
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    Damn. FML.
     
  2. Cuteness :0
     
  3. Update this PLEEEEAAASE!