Picking Up The Pieces

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Jan 13, 2012.

  1. Well hello there fans.

    If you're not already aware, this is a sequel to my first Fan-Fic "Torn".

    So PLEASE READ THAT ONE FIRST. Or you'll be lost in this one.

    Thanks to everyone for the support! You guys kept me going! I know Torn was SHORT but I felt that it needed to be ended soon, due to the struggling romance and stuff. 

    I love you all! 

    Most of all, Enjoy!!!

    Loveand Rockets

    Jenna
     
  2. Yay!!!!!
     
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    Ryans POV

    I sat next to the hospital bed everyday, for almost two years. I postponed college and stopped everything.. For her sake.

    I couldn't bare the thought of her being in a coma. It wasn't real to me..
    Everything seemed like a haze ever since that night.. Two whole years ago..

    Dr.Munique walked in and checked her bloodlines and tubes, she was okay another day. They didn't know if she was paralyzed yet, because she never woke up.

    I always prayed for the best. . .

    I drifted slowly into a deep sleep, dreaming again of when she used to love me.. Breathe and smile.. Everything was perfect here.. I prayed I could be like her and stay dreaming like this forever.


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    "SHE'S WAKING UP!!! SHE'S WAKING UP!!! GET THE VENTALATOR READY!!!" Dr. Munique screamed at all his nurses.

    I awoke from the chair and sat up, thinking I had dreamed those beautiful words.

    Her hand flinched. It was normal. She was so peaceful.


    "R-Ryan..." She whispered.

    I looked to her and saw a flash of the deep blue eyes, that had missing to me for two years..

    She was finally awake...

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    Woo! Tell me what ya think 
     
  4. Yay!!!! I love you!!!! Lol
     
  5. Pie ? Did you read torn???
     
  6.  Bump!!!!! 
     
  7. Yes! Of course I did! 
    I don't remember bumping it though 
     
  8. OMG!!! I LOVE YOU! BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP IM SOOOO GLAD YOU STARTED A SEQUEL BUMP NOW!!!
     
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  10. bump!!!lovin this
     
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    Jacobs POV

    I sat in the cafe, next to Tucker, my friend from College.

    "Youre leaving her? Dude, you loved her? Why don't you just wait on her?" He asked angrily.

    "Ive been waiting two years!! I can't just give up on my life in hopes she'll wake up soon! I love her, but I can't be happy unless i'm with her, but how can I be with her if she's almost dead!!!!???" I stormed away from him looking away, almost in tears, thinking of Jenna. I couldn't help myself for being so frustrated.

    I knew I shouldn't have let her go out after Ryan that night....

    I walked into the elavator and hit the 3rd floor button. The ICU- Intensive Care Unit. She was in room 243, next to a woman who had been hit by a semi-truck, eight years ago, she still hadn't waken up. The man who loved her has been sitting at her side, waiting to propose for eight years.
    That's what I'm scared of.

    She might never wake up. . .

    I walked in and saw Ryan standing over her, eyes wide and holding her hand. "Wake up!!! Common! There ya go... " he smiled at her.

    I groaned and walked to her... Suddenly, a flash of that familiar, ocean blue.

    I took her hand from Ryan, and looked. Her eyes opened. Then closed again as she moaned a litttle and pulled her hand away from mine, and reached greedily for Ryans.

    She sat up weakly and looked around..

    She let out a gasp, and pulled away from the two of us.

    "WHO ARE YOU!!! GET AWAY FROM ME!!!!" She screamed.

    A nurse ran back in with a ventalator as Dr.Munique ran in. They stabillized her as she calmed down.

    The doctor pulled Ryan and I into the hall and shook his head. "We aren't sure, but Jenna's reaction shows possible results of permanent memory loss....Wwe are running tests now, you will have the results soon. I'm so sorry..." Dr.Munique spoke, as he briskly walked away....

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