The Dawns (not for the easily scared)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_Neon-Ninja_ (01), Jan 12, 2012.

  1. Never go out at dawn... The Dawns will get you... They slowly kill you and drag your body to Dawn lake, Named after the infamous Dawns... Only one person has survived The Dawns... And this is her story....
     
  2. Lily and her mates rode up to the big gates of Thunder and Lightning's house, These two could turn you to stone with one look.
    "Go on the Lil'!" Said Charlotte
    "Go on Lily. Don't be a wuss!" Said Molly
    "Stay behind me Mol'?" Said Lily sounding very scared
    "Fine!" Says Molly as she lets her bike fall to the ground as she steps off
    Lily slowly opens the gates. They let out a loud sqweek
    "SHHHH" Hissed Molly
    "Alright, Alright!" Whispered Lily
     
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  4. 
     
  5. Bump bumpy bumpity boo^^ continue pls!!
     
  6. Lily slowly continues up the long path with Molly slowly following and Charlotte waiting with the bikes
    "OWCH!" Shouts Lily
    "SHHHHH" Snaps Molly
    "I hurt my foot!!" Whispers Lily
    "Oh no.... ITS ALMOST DAWN!!" Shouted Molly as she grabbed Lily's hand and ran back to Charlotte "We gotta go! Look at the time!"
    "But... My foot!" Said Lily in pain
    "Sort it later!" Said Molly
    As they rush along Lily falls of her bike and Molly and Charlotte leave her behind.
     
  7. Bad friends.  BUMP!!!
     
  8. MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
     
  9. Bump
     
  10. MORE!
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  11. "GUYS?" Shouts Lily. She checks her watch and realises its 1 min to dawn. She quickly stands up and limps to the house and knocks on the door. "LET ME IN!" She carries on for the next 30 seconds and then... Clock strikes dawn...
     
  12. Lily bangs on the door as hard as she can. It dosent move. She starts crying and sits down on the floor. "If this is how i die... Im going to look good while doing it!" she grabbs a long stick and gets some mud and wipes it on her face. Fighter style... She sees The Dawns scuttleing to her, they were little animals with tiny red eyes and a huge mouth and hundreds of teath... Red in colour, she starts attacking them one by one. Forgetting about her foot she kills everyone before clock strikes 12:01...
     
  13. everyone? Even me! 
     
  14. Lily looks around and she sees Charlotte and Molly coming towards her in Molly's Dad's car with Molly's Dad.
    "WOAH! What happened here? Are they... Dawns??" Said Charlotte as she stepped out of the car
    "OMG!!! I have ALWAYS wanted to poke a Dawn with a stick!" Said Molly cheerfully
    "They started attacking so i killed them!" Said Lily proudly
    "Woah! You should win a award!" Said Charlotte "First one to survive The Dawns!"
    "Your right Char'!"
     
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