Revolve

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Cookie-Dough-Rebel (01), Jan 10, 2012.

  1. Prologue

    Was the room spinning or is it just me?

    I felt a throbbing pain in my head. I couldn't control my arms and legs. A demonic sound kept echoing in my head.

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    "She's changed, Lia." a woman's voice said.

    "What's wrong with Maddi?" another woman said. Mom?

    "Her body is different. It has changed. I don't know why but she's transforming, Lia."

    I watched as mom looked worried. She saw me and she rushed over to me quickly.

    "Honey? Are you okay?" Mom was frantic.

    "Yes. Mom, I had a dream last night. I dreamt of a girl. She-she looked like a swan."
     
  2. I just took that one sentence from Black Swan 

    Anyway, updating in a few minutes, I hope you like it!
     
  3. I feel like a stalker noe. Haja  BUMP FIRST!!
     
  4. Vaps and haja? Are you inventing a new language or something?
     
  5. Hiiii! 
     
  6. Prologue (continued)

    The hallway was empty; it was quiet and, it was awkward if you were walking alone.

    I was.

    But I wasn't afraid, I expected everything, just to reduce my fright.

    Suddenly, I came to a stop.

    I don't know how or why, but there was something that made me stop.

    My back itched abnormally. I had to scratch it because it was too irritating.

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    Chapter 1

    "Maddi! Wait up yo!" Ashton called out.

    We were best friends, but we were different in every way. I sing, he raps, I wear tights, he's all baggy pants.

    I knew a thing about him. He has feelings for me. He told me in the eighth grade but I wouldn't believe him.

    I had feelings for another person, Nate.

    He never knew I existed, but he had this rare smile that you never knew possible in the world.