My Gucci Is My Armor But My Blade Is My Weapon

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eden-Love (01), Dec 22, 2011.

  1. BUMP!! ;) yippy another update
     
  2. S-Saw What!?Moar! Bump!
     
  3. Brea's POV

    3 Climbers going into my father's den!! I sprinted pass them so fast I wasn't sure they saw me. I growled at them from the darkness. They didn't hesitate (Is that the right way to spell it? ) and kept moving forward. I gripped on to the biggest one's leg and easily threw him against the wall. I bit his neck leaving him to die. The two smaller wolves sprinted away as I turned to them. I walked out of the den and saw Ari running to her den.

    Ariana's POV

    Plan backfired! Brea really scary!! Note to self: Stay Away From Brea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Yes, that IS how you spell it. Very good update, I shall be waiting for more. 
     
  5. Thnx sorry that it's short
     
  6. Awesome!! Bump!!
     
  7. BUMP..



    P.S GOOD WRITING....AGAIN
     
  8. Bump bumpy bumpity boo^^ (continue updating pls)
     
  9. Brea's POV

    Blood. I smell blood. DEER!!!! I ran to the dining hall and smelled the fresh kill. "Lunch!!", I shouted! Wolves ran everywhere.
    After Lunch

    Brea's POV

    I love deer!!!

    Aliana's POV

    Didn't eat. Still scared. 
     
  10. Tehe super short
     
  11. Yeah. Which is why you should update!! Bump!!
     
  12. Azalea's POV

    I haven't left my den since I got here. I didn't eat or even go on patrol. Today Brea came to my den opening with a piece of bloody deer in her mouth. She dropped it in my den and left. I wanted to thank her but how could I?

    *I'm thinking of adding a couple new characters. I need a couple more guys and 2 more girls to be Brea's sisters. And do you think there should be a relationship or not? Blah me blabbering on forgot to ask what do you think of the story so far?
     
  13. I still  it!!
     
  14. Can I sign up?