Free Write

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Black_White- (01), Dec 12, 2011.

  1. Just to tell u, THATS VERY OFFENSIVE since I am necklace. She did that becuz she doesn't want to use our identities. JEEZ
     
  2. And jade is right, I'd like to c u rite a good story.
     
  3. Ohmygawd kiks this ema gurl is obviously one of them.
     
  4. One of the fat skinny Jean wearing fake Italian leather mustache girlz
     
  5. Yah.... BUMP! can't wait till the next one
     
  6. Narrators Point Of View

    Necklace watched the new girl Ema march in like she was so cool. "Ugh." she grunted. "Hello hello!" Dolph came over to her. "Hey. Do you think Ema is cool?" she asked Dolph. "Uhh any relatives?" she asked. "Idk... Her last name is Hammound." necklace said. Dolph widened her eyes and took a breath in. Necklace said "Ohmigawd." then in unison the both said "MIRA!" necklace laughed. "Well keep an eye on her but if shes anything like Mira stay away from her." Dolph winked. "Hey I gotta go to class. After school I have to go home Darrel is going to be with my mom so text me the deets about what you all talk about." Dolph said grabbing her things for English class. "Kay." Necklace said giving Dolph a one hand "thumbs up" as she looked at her iPhone.
     
  7. Ema:
    Brown hair with ugly highlights
    Wearing blue contacts
    Mira-ish
    Fat but still wears skinny jeans.
     
  8. Mira is:
    Mean, self centered, stupid, thinks she's popular, ugly, friendless, looks like a horse.

    Narrators POV

    The next day…
    DAKZ standing in a corner chatting about MIRa.
    Necklace: she's so stupid....
    Jeans: shhh… she's coming!
    Mira walks towards them and shoves jeans pony and necklace aside and hugs dolph.
    Dolph doesn't hug back.
    So guys, wat sup?! Mira says.
    We were insulting u, b*tch! Pony says

    Ok.... Mira says awkwardly.wat did u do dolph? I like Ur shoes dolph! Blah blah blah… dolph just ignores mira.
    Necklace mouthed: let's ditch this piece of sh*t. They nod.
    ....
    * I suck at writing....
     
  9. Dolph: Hey Mira Look! Here comes pengu-Vicky and her Crew....
     
  10. KIKI READ A STORY CALLED LOVE,LIES IT'S BY MELLY11 or whatever and I think it's sorta like this and by Kiki I mean marshmallow....
     
  11. No ones reading this after u left pimd!