 FATE

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  1. FATE

    Tell Me If You Like The Story I'm About To Introduce Then I'll Make the full part one


    Part One
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    Name: Gale

    " Hello Gale Micknal speaking how may I help u?" I said.
    " Um Yea Ms.Micknal I'm Drake Slyvian from the Slyvian corporation and I FATE

    Tell Me If You Like The Story I'm About To Introduce Then I'll Make Part Two


    Part One
    _______________

    Name: Gale

    "Hello, this is Gale Micknal how may I help you?" I said.
    " Oh yes we know who you are, I'm Carter James the president of the James corporation I'm sure you heard of me-" "Nope never heard of you" I interrupted.
    "You never heard of us.... Never mind that I just wanted to see if I can buy your business." Carter said with a some what calmness in his voice.
    " Umm.... Not for sale now if u excuse me I have work to attend to" I said as I closed the phone. " God since when has my business bloom so much" I thought to my self as I started to clear my desk.
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    Name: Carter

    " I-I-I didn't get the stupid business" I said to my best friend with weariness in my voice. " it's okay.... Haha u can always go to her and get her to fall in love with you then take the *** business." said Kendal. " That's perfect Thank you Thank you Thank you" I said as I got up and hug Kendal. Kendal look at me with a surprised look in his eye and said " I was just kidding you know!" " But it's perfect!" I said. I went to book my flight for a one way ticket to Boston. " This is my chance let me do it..."

    The end of the preview hoped you enjoyed!!
     
  2. Sorry I messed up on this thread please ignore the top!
     
  3. I fix the thread up


    FATE
    Gale's story

    Characters
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    Gale-Gale is hopeless when it comes to her parents expectations- well her fathers. What she needs is a husband and fast to get on her dad's will or else her business is a goner. Must she marry that man Farsher or will a true unexpected hope will come and save her?

    Carter- Carter owned lots of business - well lots of well known business. But Gale Micknal is a tough nut to crack. No matter what money he shoves at her face there's no use! So he planed to get her to fall in love with him, it shouldn't be hard.... Not until he met her. Kind funny beautiful fun weird unreadable and did I mention beautiful.

    Kendal- Kendal has a big secret he is keeping from his best friend Carter. But when he finally meets Gale the drama starts.

    Sydney- Sydney met Kendal a really long time ago - heck they where once in love... until he left her alone... On their wedding day. And when he finally comes back to Boston shock is on them all...


    Tell Me If You Like The Story I'm About To Introduce Then I'll Make the full part one


    Part One
    _______________

    Name: Gale

    "Hello, this is Gale Micknal how may I help you?" I said.
    " Oh yes we know who you are, I'm Carter James the president of the James corporation I'm sure you heard of me-" "Nope never heard of you" I interrupted.
    "You never heard of us.... Never mind that I just wanted to see if I can buy your business." Carter said with a some what calmness in his voice.
    " Umm.... Not for sale now if u excuse me I have work to attend to" I said as I closed the phone. " God since when has my business bloom so much" I thought to my self as I started to clear my desk.
    _______________
    Name: Carter

    " I-I-I didn't get the stupid business" I said to my best friend with weariness in my voice. " it's okay.... Haha u can always go to her and get her to fall in love with you then take the ***in business." said Kendal sarcastically . " That's perfect!!!
    Thank you Thank you Thank you" I said as I got up and hug Kendal. Kendal look at me with a surprised look in his eye and said " I was just kidding you know!" " But it's perfect!" I said. I went to book my flight for a one way ticket to Boston. " This is my chance let me do it..."

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    Name: Kendal

    " Bro stop it's hopeless, don't do it, you will make a fool of your self!" I said trying to discourage my stupid best friend Carter. Knowing it was no use I strode over to Carter and put my hand on his shoulder. " I'm going to do it and you won't stop me. Kendal aren't you my best friend, you should encourage me to do this. It's my big break from trying to buy that business. Even though I won't come back sinnnggle it's alright as long as she's pretty." said Carter like it was an everyday thing. " Okay but I'm coming to" I said with a huge sign. " God I gotta tell him soon or he'll find out the hard way... Okay I tell him soon." I decided in my head. Carter booked 2 tickets to Boston. " We are leaving tomorrow at 5'O clock "

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    Name: Gale

    " Sydney what am I going to do!" I said as I wrapped my hands around my hot coco. " Well let's see you can get married to that Farsher guy" said Sydney my best girl friend. " Haha are you dreaming" I said with a matter of fact voice. " Okay okay haha but seeing you as Mrs. Farsher will be hilarious!" Sydney said laughing.Then I join in, we where laughing so hard People turned and stared at us like we where crazy.... Soon we had the whole cafe laughing with us.....