Crush On You

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheAndi, Oct 26, 2011.

  1. Hey!You!Yeah You!!It would be please if you read FATE...Is Right Here.Please comment too!!!Hope you enjoy it!!
     
  2. YOU PEOPLE ARE THE BESTT  You totally just made my day 

    (Yay! Page 50!)

    Since you asked for it...

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    --------------ABI's POV------------

    The moment I saw Leo, my eyes, the ones that were so happy with Carter, the ones that had just cried waterfalls, turned into slits.

    "Who's this guy?" Leo demanded.

    "Who's the girl you were snogging?" I snapped back. Ugh, if he wasn't gripping my hand so hard, I would have slapped him pretty hard.

    He blinked and his grip loosen a tiiny bit. I got him. He wouldn't deny it. That was the finally straw, I pulled my arm away and gave him a slap that echoed throughout the hallway.

    I realized I was crying again, my heart broken. All the hope that maybe--just maybe-- there was all a weird explaination to what I saw, was gone. He really did cheat.

    I felt so...angry. I wanted to punch him, punch that girl, punch myself.

    Let's start with him, shall we?

    He was down at the ground, rubbing his cheek from my slap.

    I could not watch this anymore. I kicked him hard--you-know-where-- and watched him wince.

    And I walked away.

    -----------GINNY's POV-------------

    "You're right." I blurted out the moment Cassy and I were out of the classroom.

    She looked puzzled, "Right about what?"

    I looked down, feeling asgamed of myself, "Peter."

    FLASHBACK

    I ran out from the hospital, furious. What-What right does she have, stating those cruel things?

    Yeah, I know Peter's done those things before, but he's changed. Truly changed. She didn't know. It's not like she was at our dates.

    Maybe that head trauma caused this.

    I ran into Peter's open arms the moment I saw him at the fancy Italian restaurant he had picked.

    "How is she?" Peter asked, leading me into the restaurant and pulling out a chair for me. I saw people give me dirty looks but she didn't care. So what if I was wearing shorts and a shirt to a fancy resto, Peter didn't care and that's one of the things I loved about him.

    "We got into a fight." I said, eyeing him nervously.

    "About what?" he looked down at the menu, nonchalant.

    "She said you tried to kiss her and that you were just using me." I was so freakin' nervous and I chided myself for it. What's there to be nervous about? I trust him. He wouldn't do such a thing.

    "Ohhh...listen, the carbonara here is really good...." he started skimming through the menu. It was obvious he was avoiding the question.

    "Were you?" I gripped his hand, forcing him to look up and into my eyes.

    And I saw it.

    END OF FLASHBACK

    I narrated the story to Cassy and watched her face change. She wasn't angry but actually...sympathic?

    "But...if you knew this the day you left, why didn't you come with us after?" she asked.

    I told her the truth I still couldn't face, "I was ashamed. You know, me throwing a fit there and then it ending up that you were right. Can you ever forgive me?"

    "Of course I can-"

    Before she could finish Abi strode into the hallway.

    -----------AUTHOR's POV---------

    As Abi approached them, the girls noticed that her eyes were watery, her fist was clenched, and her cheeks were flushed.

    "Leo cheated on me." those four words told the other girls everything. No questions asked, nothing was left to be said.

    They were silent for a moment; each of them grieving for their broken hearts.

    "I propose," Ginny said, "No more guys."

    Abi thought of Carter..Cassy thought of Cameron...would they be the same?

    Abi and Cassy thought the same, I've had my heart broken once, I'm not going to let that happen again.

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    PHEW AGAIN. HAHAHAHA, keep bumpin'!
     
  3. BUMP. SO GOOD.
     

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  5. BUMP

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  7. Du-du-du-du.

    I felt like updating. Short though. 

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    CASSY's POV

    WINTER FORMAL MOVED NEXT WEEK! STILL HAVE TIME TO GET YOUR DATES!

    Pfft. Whatever, I thought as I stared at the multiple posters scattered across the hall.

    "You wanna go?" a voice behind me said, causing me to jump.

    I spun around.

    "Uh, actually, Xander..uh," I didn't know how to exactly explain the whole no-guys thing.

    "As friends." he said simply, though his eyes said otherwise.

    "Oh..um...I-I-I'm going stag." which was partly true, but I wasn't planning on going anyway.

    "Oh." his eyes immediately cast downward and he started to walk away.

    It was like no one was there, as I stared at his back getting smaller and smaller into the crowd. That wasn't so bad, was it?

    Then why did I feel like my heart was walking away with him?

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    SHORT!
    But I just need to get that out. 
     
  8.  Awesome as always Aslan. YAY!!