The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

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  1. If you dont like it then don't read it im not making you read it. if you are gonna continuously say bad things about my story then GET OFF MY THREAD!!!!!
     
    #1241 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  2. I'm not saying bad things. If you can't handle friendly critique, don't post your story.
     
    #1242 Qinny, Dec 30, 2011
  3. Look it's my first story yea there's gonna be flaws there's gonna be mistakes but I'm learning as I go. If you can't take that into consideration then keep your mouth shut
     
    #1243 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  4. Then let me point it out and help you.
     
    #1244 Qinny, Dec 30, 2011
  5. Guys, let's not get worked up about this
     
    #1245 I-Love-Oreo-Pie, Dec 30, 2011
  6. I'm not. I'm sorry, I'm just giving an opinion.
     
    #1246 Qinny, Dec 30, 2011
  7. Well if u would have paid attention then you would have remembered that she's only 2 months pregnant. You can't tell the gender at 2 months. Its at 4 or 5 months that you can tell the gender of the baby
     
    #1247 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  8. Doubt I'll update tonight. Kinda pissed off right now.
     
    #1248 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  9. I'm not siding or anything but, Holly, I don't think you should be pissed because of this.

    You should read what he has to say and try to understand it, and you will be able to improve your writing with his feedback.

    Cause not many people will even take the time to look at your writing carefully then tell you all about it. Tell you how to improve it.

    So look at this as with a positive mind, thinking he's trying to help you.

    This just what I think, if you disagree with my opinions then okay. It's fine.
     
    #1249 aMintChocolate, Dec 30, 2011
  10. I'm not pissed off at this. I was pissed off before this. This was just the breaking point. Today hasn't been a good day. Besides it's my story. I'm not making anyone read it. If you don't like it then dont read it I don't really care but I'm not gonna listen to someone do this crap when they didn't read it carefully.
     
    #1250 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  11. It's not that I don't appreciate the feedback it's just I'd rather you friend me then give me feedback instead of putting it on my thread making me look stupid like I don't know what I'm writing about.
     
    #1251 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  12. PEACE!! Please stop arguing. It's just feedback which may or may not be right,and that post doesn't change anything about your story. Okay?!
    PEACE.
     
    #1252 *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 30, 2011
  13. Thanks Tiffany but to me it kinda does.
     
    #1253 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  14. Well, I think Hollys story is frickin amazing. That all's I gots to say
     
    #1254 -Angel_Cuppcake_97-, Dec 30, 2011
  15. Your story is still amazing no matter what he says okay? 
     
    #1255 *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 30, 2011
  16. Thanks angel

    Sorry guys my nerves are kinda shot right now and I'm kinda tired but for those who actually like my story let me know if you want another update and I'll try my best to put another update up
     
    #1256 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  17. Thanks Tiffany
     
    #1257 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  18. BY ROYAL COMMAND I DEMAND PEACE and tacos
     
    #1258 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  19. It's okay Holly. Rest for a day 
     
    #1259 *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 30, 2011
  20. Oh James lol somehow that made me feel better lol
    James I'm gonna appoint you as the guard of this thread lol if someone starts being a jerk about the thread let me know
     
    #1260 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
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