Sexual Blood Lust

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CeciliaSophieAnn (01), Dec 28, 2011.

  1. Will do another update tomorrow
     
  2. IT'S AMAZING!


    By the way, could you please read my story?
     
  3. Sure what is it called? And thanks
     
  4. Thank you! Evanesce Of Moolight. I'm tying to get people to read and your welcome!
     
  5. Read it to what you posted and I absolutely loved it
     
  6. Goodnight PIMD posting another one tomorrow working on chapter 2.
    This is all my work (not a fanfiction ect) and comments and edits are welcomed thanks <3
     
  7. Working on update later today
     
  8. After what seemed like five days I finally decided it was time to pack up continue tomorrow. I go and get myself another cup of coffee and gather my files and walks to the elevator and presses the button before getting in and stands there as I listen to the elevator go down and to the employee parking lot and walks out unlocking the car and getting in and started the engine and drove home. Getting home I stopped by the Chinese restaurant and got some carry out before driving home and walking in the door not noticing it was unlocked. I set my stuff down then takes off my jacket then goes to my room and gets my night clothing and jumps in the shower. After getting out I go to change and I feel I breath on my neck and shivers go down my spine and I turn around and look at the guy that I seen on the elevator.

    Demetrius looked at the girl her hair wet and dripping and barely covered by a towel, he steps toward her and reaches out to run his finger along her neck and she jumped and backs up against the night stand gripping it trying to look for a weapon that wasn't there. He could take her now if he wanted, she didn't have anything to protect her and one small bite and she be done. But yet something about her intrigued him in no way a girl ever did but her...

    I stare at him waiting for him to lunge but he just reaches out and runs his finger along my neck I freeze and wince thinking this is it. But then I open my eyes when he runs his thumb along my cheek and goes in as if he was going to kiss me. I close my eyes waiting for his lips to touch my own but when I didn't feel them I open my eyes and look around he was gone no trace to where he went.

    Demetrius sat on top of the building that she lived in and looked at his hand. He could have easily kissed her and made her want him but yet for some reason he did not want to take her like she was some common prey. She was different he didn't know how or why but she was and he was willing to rush exposure to find the answers.
     
  9. Can i be added?

    Name: Melly Summers
    Looks: Blond hair, green eyes
    Personality: Sly, but sweet. Cunning aswell.
    Race: Creature
     
  10. Thanks I'll add it in my next update :)
     
  11. Editor wanted please? My grammar might need fix kind of and I need help
     
  12. I want to be a character please


    Name: Eric Night
    Features: Tall, Long curly brown hair, Gray eyes
    Profile: sweet with a dark side
    Character: Vampire
     
  13. Demetrius sighed and hopped down from the building and continued on his way, he needed to feed so when he gets to taste her blood he won't risk draining her. He finds his favorite spot to get his prey from and walks in spotting Melly and Eric he flashes his winning smile and goes over to sit with them."[color=light pink]You okay? You look like you seen something that you can't have?[/color]" Melly asks and smirks her sweet smile. He shake my head and chuckle looking at the hostess and orders a drink."What's up man?"Eric says and looks at the hostess and winks. He sigh when he see their fangs out, he guesses it's time to feed that's fine with me,"Let's go."He says with a authoritative voice and Melly and Eric get up their eyes sparking with a hint of mischief as we walk out. He stops and smell the air for their prey and licks his lips when he smells a petite blond girl. He signals Melly and Eric to their positions as he puts a suggestive thought in the girl's head and gets her to follow him. He pauses and opens his arms watching her walk right into his arms and he kisses her neck and she tilts her head letting him kiss her neck and he feels his fangs extend and sharpen before he sinks his fangs into her neck. She moans thinking the thought in her head is a very suggestive thought. Eric and Melly appear and the feed is on. We only take enough to fill our need before we use our saliva to heal her wounds. Demetrius makes a suggest thought for her to return home and forget everything that happened in the past twenty minutes.
     
  14. Quick update so I realize there are some grammar mistakes

    It should be- He shakes his head
     
  15. Post any other grammar mistakes you can
     
  16. Re posting to fix grammar mistakes
     
  17. Demetrius sighed and hopped down from the building and continued on his way, he needed to feed so when he gets to taste her blood he won't risk draining her. He quickly finds his favorite spot to get his prey from and walks in spotting Melly and Eric he flashes his winning smile and goes over to sit with them."You okay? You look like you seen something that you can't have?" Melly asks and smirks her super sweet smile. Demetrius shakes his head and chuckles before looking at the hostess and orders a couple of drinks."What's up man?"Eric says and looks at the hostess and winks. He sigh when he see their fangs out, he guesses it's time to feed that was fine with him,"Let's go."He says with a authoritative voice and Melly and Eric get up their eyes sparking with a hint of mischief as they walk out. He walked out after them and stops to smell the air for their prey and licks his lips when he smells a petite blond girl. He signals Melly and Eric to their positions as he puts a suggestive thought in the girl's head and gets her to follow him. He pauses and opens his arms watching her walk right into his arms and he kisses her neck and she tilts her head letting him kiss her neck and he feels his fangs extend and sharpen before he sinks his fangs into her neck. She moans thinking the thought in her head is a very suggestive thought. Eric and Melly appear and the feed is on, we only take enough to fill our need before we use our saliva to heal her wounds. Demetrius makes a suggest thought for her to return home and forget everything that happened in the past twenty minutes.