The Other Guy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ThisIsJoycee (01), Nov 29, 2011.

  1. Bump!! I want more 
     
  2. Jade’s POV

    I got into my car and headed home to get ready for our date with Logan.

    I was looking forward to this the whole day. Maybe that’s why I wasn’t so hard on the cheerleaders during practice. And I suddenly looked at Diana as a friend. I know I glared at her when she was talking to Logan but I found out that she already had a boyfriend back home so I guess I had less competition.

    “I’ll pick you up at 5 . Love u babe” I got a text from Logan and smiled, turning red.
    I got ready and finished at exactly 5:00pm
    I waited and waited....
    5:30 pm
    Maybe Logan was just running late.
    And waited and waited...
    6:30 pm
    Okay I am so going to kill him!

    “WHERE ARE YOU???” I angrily texted him.
    I cannot believe that he stood me up. I called him 3 times and left tons of messages.

    “Logan I really don’t appreciate you being late for an hour and 30 minutes! Where are you??? And if you’re not going to be here in 5 minutes then I AM GOING TO HUNT. YOU. DOWN!” I furiously left him a message for the 7th time.

    I started my car and drove to the Alley. It was a local bar which his dad owned. That was probably where he was since he did like to drink beer. A LOT OF BEER.

    I went inside to find his older and legal-enough-to-drink friend, Mason.
    “Hey did Logan happen to be here?” I asked him.
    “Uh..yeah Logan! Yeah h-he was here.” Mason said drunk, as he pushed his black hair out of his face.
    “Well do you know where he went?”
    “Oh yeah..he went to uh...school! Yeah school!” He said as his head hit the table and he passed out from his being drunk.
    “Umm..thanks and try not to get so drunk okay?” I patted his head and smiled even though I was so furious at Logan.

    I arrived at the school parking lot and saw Logan’s car.

    HE IS SO DEAD.

    I marched in the school and when no one was in the hallways I went directly to the gym.
    I heard muffled screams from a girl. It sounded like it was coming from the locker room.

    I ran as fast as I could thinking that someone was in danger.
    My heart was beating fast as I saw a muscular figure leaning over a girl.
    The man had blonde hair and was wearing a jacket - an all too familiar jacket.

    I gasped as the figure turned around.
    "Logan?" My face looked hurt and puzzled.
    He looked at me then at the girl. He let go of the girl and walked towards me.

    "Jade baby." He said with fake pleading eyes as he grabbed my arm but I quickly pulled away from him.

    "Don't" I said roughly going to leave when I caught a glimpse of who the girl was.

    "I knew it! Diana how could you?" I was even more hurt knowing that my friend was with my boyfriend or now my ex-boyfriend.

    I was so humiliated! Now I was the girl who's boyfriend cheated on with her friend.

    "Jade! I didn't plan this. He kissed me first!" Diana said helplessly crying.

    "Just stop with all your lies. Logan were done and Diana I never want you to talk to me ever again." I said as I turned to leave when another voice joined in.

    "What's going on here?" It was Austin. His face looked hurt and shocked.

    "Well your little girlfriend here is kissing him." I said.

    "Yeah sorry man I guess she never really liked you." Logan said smirking. I really wanted to bust his handsome face.

    "Austin you have to believe me. Don't listen to him!" Diana pleaded.

    "How could you? Austin whispered with so much hurt in his voice then left without saying anything more.

    "Goodbye Logan." I said as tears welled up in my eyes.

    I ran to my car and drove as fast as I could.It started raining and I was crying really hard by now.

    A car honked loudly and as I turned to my right I saw bright flashing lights as it came nearer and nearer and before I could escape everything went black...

    Soo did you guys like it?? Leave comments and suggestion!! Keep bumpin!
     
  3. Bump!!! Can my character come in as a friend for Diana who...(read my gift message for the rest)

    Name:Angela Cartier
    Age:(same age as Diana)
    Personality:Sweet,caring and kind(read my gift message for the rest)
    Looks:Long wavy blonde hair to her waist,piercing sky blue eyes,(read my gift message for the rest)
     
  4. BUMP!!! I still know what happens. (laughs evillly) I'm eviiiiil. HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAAHHA
     
  5. Bump !! First person.. Lol
     
  6. Tiffany: I though you wanted to be mean! Hahahha okay wait so u wanna be mean or nice??? 
     
  7. Andi: Hahahahahha k. Love ya! Don't tell!
     
  8. Hyugaz: hahaha thanks!!
     
  9. bump!!!!!!! 



     
  10. Bump!!!!! I love it
     
  11. Sorry guys for not updating in a long time. I may update tomorroe but ai'm not promising anything. I just don't feel like it for the moment.
     
  12. It's okay dear. 
     
  13. Hey Guys!! I AM SOOOO SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING IN AN AWFUL LONG TIME!  I'm going somewhere tomorrow and the day after that where there is no signal so I can't update! Maybe when I come back okay? Thanks and a MERRY CHRISTMAS!! 