Hi, my name is Alida. I've been on PIMD for a long time, and I've been reading and writing stories even longer. There is a lot of very talented writers out there, and this will be considered my own 'Official Review' thread. If your story has interested me in any way, I'll be posting my comments here on them once a day. I am a very picky person, so your writing has to be very good to be mentioned here. I'll also be writing about any current events that might happen around on the threads, or forums. Please remember this is all my opinion, and isn't meant to hurt anyone's feelings Most Popular stories of the day My Gucci Is My Armor But My Blade Is My Weapon (Wrote by: Eden love) Blood Lost in Lust Thinking of you (Wrote by: RockinRosie215) My favorite Story of the day The massacre (Wrote by: Rawr) -- my thoughts of this story: it was beautifully written. It shows a lot of time and effort to make this story. It's easy to understand, and a thrilling read. It's definitely The worst story of the Day High School of The Haunted House -- my thought of this story: ugh, this one was painful to read through. There was very little words used, there was short sentences. It seemed to be made from a young child. There was no details what so ever, and it had no real foundation. I didn't know were he was going with this. But I suggest you work a bit harder. Helpful writing tips Re-read what you have just wrote after finishing an update. Make sure all sentences are a complete thought. Don't be afraid to add in more details (you can never be to descriptive) Shout Outs This is a shout out to a good friend of mine. Sensualpie, congrats on the success of your sequel! Quote of the day "The pen is more mighty then the sword" The poem of the day Alida's Song (wrote by: Salrion) --My thoughts of this poem: it was beautiful, so much feeling and emotion, it is truly the most romantic way of saying 'I love you' Funniest Picture of the day Thank you all for reading
Omg... My "The Massacre" won?! Lol... But I'm a young child. .-. Thanks Alida, I'll update it more often.
O M G i wanna make my own. Lmao The haunted house thing is kind of a fail. Please read The Hand! It's suppossed to NOT be a fail.
Can u read freedom too bunny?Idc if it's bad or horrible.I just need to practiceAnd can u please come back?We will need u on war
Now Hiring A lead reporter: (with the responsibility to find the most popular stories and give me your opinion) Reporter minions: (you are to interview the authors of the stories the lead reporter has picked.) Publicist: (your job is to check over the writing of each issue, so everything is 100% correct.) Advertiser: (creates forums, wall arts, clubs, etc, for Readers Paradise. Security: (for any troll that happen to comment on the thread you have the power to unleash the army of troll minions. Army Trolls: (you attack, farm, or troll anyone that trolls on this thread Thanks
Lead reporter Stories Recommended Blood On The Ice(by SensualPie) Red Rose(BOTI's sequel)(by SensualPie) hunting dawn(by Bubble_Bunny_1901) Amore Andante(by kkaattiieeshute) His Life...in My Hands(by kkaattiieeshute) More to come!
Please don't use my story, it's hard giving an honest opinion of my own work without down playing it, or making it sound more then it is.