My Gucci Is My Armor But My Blade Is My Weapon

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eden-Love (01), Dec 22, 2011.

  1. Him is Ouma Shu. He will make a later appearance in the story. Nd yeah Linda my cousin had suggested it.
     
  2. Him is Ouma Shu. He will make a later appearance in the story. Nd yeah Linda my cousin had suggested it.
     
  3. Oops srry didn't mean to post twice
     
  4. Brea has anger issues. .-.
     
  5.  this story has won 'the most popular story today' in my thread "Readers Paradise" congrats! 
     
  6. Thnx I kno she has issues I wanted her like that.
     
  7. I'm discontinuing this story. No one is reading
     
  8. I am!! Please update. Please.
     
  9. Thnx you guys
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    Brea's POV

    I ran to my den. My warm, dry den. My bed was warm. Why was it warm? I sniffed around and smelled her! I growled and turned around only to see Ariana Remi! I leaped at her and knocked her clear off her paws. I snarled like the alpha I am and clamped my teeth on her tail. I could have ended it right there but she was my cousin. The one who cost our pack 100 hunters. "Get out,Ari", I snarled. She whimpered and sprinted to her den. I have to sleep. Tomorrow I will tell father that I am home. I curled on my bed and drifted off into sleep smiling.
     
  10. I know it is short. I'm sorry
     
  11. This is a great story so far! I really want to see how it progesses!

    Ergo, BUMP!
     
  12. Ahem, *coughs a little and clears throat* ....... I WANT MOAR!!!!! xDDD
     
  13. Bump
    Bump
    Bump
    Bump
    Bump

    I LOVE IT!! XD
     
  14. Thnx I'll update soon
     
  15. Brea's POV

    I sat up happier than I had been in a long time. I stretched and yawned at the bright sunlight that filled my den. I trotted over to my father's den and pawed at the ground next to me. I crept in just in case mother was still asleep. "Father, I am home!", I said in a loud whisper. I smiled when I saw his old familiar silver coat. I ran to him only to see that he had a half tail. I gasped at the sudden realization. "Who did it??!!", I sighed. "Ari", Father answer in his hoarse morning voice. I returned to human form to inspect his wound. I softly grabbed his tail and saw him flinch. I wolfed up and ran. I ran without knowing where I was going. I ran right to the end of Stinger territory. The end was where Ari's den was. I walked in and saw her still curled on her bed. The lazy traitor. "Get up!!!", I growled. Ari jumped up in fright. Her tail tight between her legs. "Training hall in 10!", I growled. She just shyly shook her head yes. I ran to the newbie den and trotted in. "Everyone UP!!!!!!", I growled. All the newbs stood to attention except one in the back. A white coat. This one is going to be hard to break. He was sound asleep. I bit his tail to see if he would awake. He was terrified. This stubborn wolf was Kevin. I looked around and saw everyone. Ouma Shu, Alexaner, even my old teachers. "Breakfast!", I said. I walked out on my way to the training hall when I saw........