The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Dylan's point of view:

    After school today I went home and decided to think about my future and who I wanted to be with forever.

    My mind immediately went to Holly. Of course why wouldn't it? She was my best friend. I've had a crush on her since like 8th grade.

    I still do have a crush on her even though I'm with Megan. Don't get me wrong Megan is great I just don't think I can be with someone who doesn't like my best friend.

    Megan is cute. She's about the same height as Holly. She has brown hair and brownish-green eyes. She's a grade below us but she's cool to be around.

    But Holly was...well...she is my Everything.

    I love when Holly smiles at me. I love when she laughs. I love when she tries to act innocent because her eyes get the saddest look in them and all I want to do is hold her in my arms.

    My thought process was interrupted by my phone ringing.

    I picked it up and said,"Hello?"

    It was Holly's parents. Her mom sounded panicky,"Dylan! Oh my God Dylan! You have to get to the hospital now!! Holly and Zack had a wreck!! They think Holly is ok but Zack is in ICU and they aren't letting anyone see him! You have to get here now!!!"

    I started panicking. I finally said,"Ok! I'll be there soon!!"

    I couldn't believe it.
    The girl I wanted to be mine was in the hospital again and they didn't know if she was ok.

    I drove 90 to nothing the whole way. And it was an agonizing hour and a half drive to that hospital.

    I went to the nurses station and asked,"Where's Holly's room?"

    They pointed to where it was and I ran to her room. I almost knocked over a few people but I didn't care. I had to see her.

    I had to be with her.
     
  2. bump!!!! 



     
  3. AWESOME *just read a few parts on the very first pages* BUMP!
     
  4. Bump!!! Yay! Dylan saves the day! Go dylan 
     
  5. Read my story, Just With You! 
     
  6. Zack's point of view:

    I saw the lights of the car but I wasn't worried about that. I was worried about Holly.

    It all happened so fast but before I blacked out I knew I tried my best to save Holly.

    All I could see was darkness. I could hear but only faintly.

    I felt myself drifting further and further into a deep sleep...
     
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  8. Sorry for the short update
     
  9. This Story is addicting just read it all!!!
     
  10. DMAN^ I'm sorry I ever got u addicted  it's pretty awesome huh?