Blood Lost in Lust

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jiode, Dec 21, 2011.

  1. On one chill January morning, four teens where returning from and teen party that they each snuck out to attend. Their names where Amun, Pandora, Orion, and Misty. Amun and Pandora where twin brother and sister, while Orion and Misty where also. They each where seventeen years old. Their hometowns name was Reedy Polk. It was a large town with scattered homes on the outskirts.
     
  2. Let me know what you think, more coming soon.
     
  3. Thanks, more coming later.
     
  4. Nice story so far?
     
  5. Write more and I'll make a review 
     
  6. Write more please
     
  7. This is my second account, but sure I will write more
     
  8. I like it looking forward to more u sound like a very talented writer
     
  9. They had lied and told their parents that they were going to the local churches sleepover but instead went to the club that was in the next town. They had began to run out of gas and decided to stop by the abandoned campsite where they once went to summer camp. The group found an unlocked cabin and began to clean away the cobwebs and dust. Amun began to say. "Do you guys see that thing in the corner..." before he could finish it jumped out into the light. Pandora screamed and ran out of the cabin into the woods. Soon after they realized that it was just a fox afraid of them new figures in his home.
     
  10. Misty and Amun decided they should go and try to find Pandora. "I'll stay here in case she comes back." said Orion. "Ok, we will call you if we find her." said Misty. "Lets go!" exclaimed Amun with eagerness. They began trudging through the muddy water and tangled weeds into the tall pine and oak trees. "I wonder where she could be." Amun said as he stepped over A dead tree carcass."I don't know but lets hope we find her as soon as possible." whispered Misty. As the keep going they came to a gully where they saw Pandora lying in the murky water.
     
  11. More coming soon, follow me for some exclusive spoilers.
     
  12. Me want spoilers
     
  13. Ok, gonna post them on my wall