Red Moon

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by F_FoR_FiRe, Dec 22, 2011.

  1. Chapter I_A New beginning

    A world that's has settled to nothing but violence , murderers and assassinations. Everyone has to protect them selves all for one and none for all.10 years ago before all this began I was 7 in mime parents dojo , always training ,never went to school but I knew something about history , I knew about the long war of the world.

    "Foxiia There's some one here to see you" mine dad said he entered the living room."Some ones here to see me?" I asked ."Yea he's in the front ",I quickly got up and headed for the front.

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    Thank you for reading , I hope you like it I need feedback
     
  2. Bump!  I only want one thing...more long updates!!  but I love it! And I love the title 
     
  3. No offense,buy isn't this supposed to be on fan fiction?
     
  4. I don't care as long as it's good 
     
  5. Foxiia 

    Simply_Fox?
     
  6. LOL! I think so...
     
  7. Lol yea and it's not Fan fic because it all Rps and no stories. I'll update in about an hour and thanks for reading 
     
  8. I arrived in front moments after leaving the living room, panting ad try to catch my breathe I head to the door. Noticing that there was a tall man in a black suit and wearing really terrible glasses at the door."
    So Your Foxiia ?" he asked , just as I stopped infront of him."Yea so what do you need from me?" I asked just as I leaned on the wall. " I'm from the national fighting association or the NFA , I heard about your skill and I decided to come and check it out for mine self. Mine demonstrating?" .

    "Sure "I said as I stepping into the practice area. As I began to demonstrate my skills I helped one hand infront of me and pivoted on one leg, as I jumped on the wall and did a backflip landing right behind the man in black.I turned around to look at him and I could see that he was suprised. "How was that asked?" , "pretty good for an amature " he said as he exited the house."I'll be back so be ready " he said waving.


    "READY FOR WHAT ?" I shouted, not replying the man suddenly disappeared.
     
  9. bump! 



     
  10. Thank you



    -I'm You
     
  11. ི I can be an assassinator.... I do do that for a living lol...


    Being a sniper for the Australian Special Elite Forces is awesome.
     
  12. Bump
    UPDATE COMING IN AN HOUR
     
  13. After the man in the black suit left I thought to my self what he said. " Your Good for an amateur" , those kept reaping in mine mind. I couldn't take it so I decide I should start practicing. I stared walking to the practice room on the other side of the house. As I was walking I noticed that the colour of our hallway was getting dimmer, like a dark abyss with nothing inside. First I though it was just me so I shut my eye lids and reopened them. It just got after I opened them.

    I couldn't walk , I leaned on the walls ad tried to find mine way out. As I moved mine hand across the wall looking for mine way out I felt someones hand touch mine shoulder. I fell , I couldn't move only thing I could do was think but it was all over when mine eyes shut. "I thinks he's coming back I heard one of them say" , "well make sure he doesn't wake up until we get there I heard an older voice say.
     
  14. Thanks I just update what do you think? 