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bone
omg i remember you from a year and a half back.
cut offfff. as it seems ironic that people (story) would prefer the other normal looking vampires to her. Excluding the three guys. And maybe you...
You have a good vocab, no punctuation mistakes and you're rather descriptive. But instead of just describing the scene you should describe her...
This is prolly not pwar ._. Just some mini war
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There are a ton of mistakes in this story, I read it from the first update to the current one all today. At first since this book seemed to have...
It is really descriptive, but there are a few tenses mistakes here and there. Maybe you should stick to past tense if you have been doing that...
:lol:
Whip Mcfury Buck_killington
That's such a sweet... gift.
LeHappyMarshmallowLover-Glenn-
BobbyMcPhee
qBOBBY
Shugo Chara. only anime I watched
An unlimited eggplant breakfast basket.
Lol When you said he was passionate it was really- Lol.
Almost everyone did that once in their pimd life :/ It's her fault for saying she would keep, but it's also your fault for trusting a stranger....
A hat